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Wednesday, March 23

  1. msg Websites message posted Websites I have added two websites which will help you find plant life of the Great Lakes. The invasive …
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    I have added two websites which will help you find plant life of the Great Lakes.

    The invasive species link is different and if you need help to find the information please ask.
    4:27 pm
  2. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content Thanks, we just did.
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    Thanks, we just did.
    8:24 am
  3. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content We fixed all the errors you told us to fix. Just wondering, does it look good now? is there anythin…
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    We fixed all the errors you told us to fix. Just wondering, does it look good now? is there anything else we should fix.
    8:22 am

Monday, March 21

  1. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content Okay, thanks for the advice.
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    Okay, thanks for the advice.
    7:33 am

Sunday, March 20

  1. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content There are very few error. There is a place where you need a space after a comma. I am not sure …
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    There are very few error. There is a place where you need a space after a comma.

    I am not sure where all the plants and animals live. Seeds are too general a plant. All plants have seeds.

    Separate your description of your biome from environmental concerns.
    6:15 pm
  2. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content Be sure to check for spelling and grammar. The threat paragraph has some incomplete sentences. Rere…
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    Be sure to check for spelling and grammar. The threat paragraph has some incomplete sentences. Reread it and fix the grammar.
    6:02 pm
  3. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content Be sure to check for spelling and grammar errors. Separate the definition of your biome from en…
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    Be sure to check for spelling and grammar errors.

    Separate the definition of your biome from environmental concerns if they are together.

    I like the arrangement of the information on your page.
    5:56 pm
  4. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content Be sure to proofread for spelling errors. I am not sure what this sentence means: Their soil i…
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    Be sure to proofread for spelling errors.

    I am not sure what this sentence means:
    Their soil is extremely rich and fertile, and tends to have deep soils that are very nutrient.

    The environmental concerns paragraph is a bit confusing.

    I assume you are still adding information. Don't leave a heading blank. Either find the information or take off the heading.
    5:52 pm
  5. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content Be sure to proofread for spelling and grammar errors. You must put a space after a comma. Are y…
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    Be sure to proofread for spelling and grammar errors. You must put a space after a comma.

    Are you describing all the plants and animals in your list? Where are the plants and animals found that you have listed?
    5:30 pm
  6. msg Proofread and content message posted Proofread and content Be sure to proofread for spelling and grammar errors. You need a space after a period. Check on…
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    Be sure to proofread for spelling and grammar errors. You need a space after a period.

    Check on your information about precipation. It is not usually measured in feet.

    The font size does not match. The headings can be made one font size smaller.
    5:22 pm

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